Traveled
to Tuban
Last
holiday I traveled to Tuban with my big family. We prepared at 04.30 in my
grandparent’s house. After we prepared, we goes together by 2 cars at 5 AM.
After 2 hours later we arrived in tuban city. In tuban city, we visited all
tourist object. We visited tuban beach at 4 PM. At tuban beach, we saw a
beautiful landscape include white sand, blue sea, sun set, and fisherman’s
boat. At tuban beach we take selfie picture, and take a walk around the beach.
After we tired, we prepared to went home. At 6 PM, we leave tuban beach. After
4 hours later we arrived in my grandparent’s house.
I'm glad that you enjoyed your vacation and organized your story quite well. But you should pay attention to the grammar, such as: goes (went), take (took), all tourist object (all tourist objects), etc. and capital letter: Tuban. Please read your story carefully, then write it again with some corrections that have been mentioned, and post it on a new page of your blog. Thank you :)
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