Traveled
to Tuban
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Last
holiday I traveled to Tuban with my big famillys
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We
are prepared at 04.30 in my grand parent’s home
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After
finish, we goes by 2 cars together at 5 am
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After
2 hourse letter we arrived in Tuban city
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In
Tuban city, we visited all tourist object
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We
visited Tuban beach together at 4 pm
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At
tuban beach, we saw beautifull landscape, white sand, blue see, sun set, and
fisherman’s goat
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At
Tuban beach we selfie, take a walk a round the beach
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After
tired, we prepared to went home
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At
6 pm we leave Tuban beach
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After
4 hourse letter we arrived in my grand parent’s home
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Nice experience, but it is a bit confusing. You wrote "After tired, we prepared to went home", was it your home? or your grandmother's home?. I think it will be better if you write "After tired, we prepared going back to grandparents' home". Please post your newest outline on a new page of your blog.
BalasHapus